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Default Whew! All of the major stuff is done. :) - 12-23-2003 , 08:56 PM







Took me what? 5 hours? Brrr, I'm sure there are probably broken links and
mispellings somewhere. I will likely comb for them later.

http://www.practialdesigns.com/

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Default Re: Whew! All of the major stuff is done. :) - 12-24-2003 , 03:08 AM






"artist" <mellorya (AT) yahoo (DOT) com> wrote

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Took me what? 5 hours? Brrr, I'm sure there are probably broken links and
mispellings somewhere. I will likely comb for them later.

http://www.practialdesigns.com/
The site looks much better, although there's still something missing and I
can't tell what it is. It looks quite empty.

"Dialog", although a valid way of spelling "dialogue" is very American. I
don't know if you are American, but to the rest of the English-speaking
world, "dialog" looks lazily phonetic. Whatever the case, it's the wrong
word since you can't have one-way dialogue - how about "one-way channel for
communication"?

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Default Re: Whew! All of the major stuff is done. :) - 12-24-2003 , 03:13 AM



artist wrote:
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Took me what? 5 hours? Brrr, I'm sure there are probably broken links
http://validator.w3.org/checklink?ur...h=&check=Check

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and mispellings somewhere. I will likely comb for them later.

http://www.practialdesigns.com/
Nice work

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Default Re: Whew! All of the major stuff is done. :) - 12-24-2003 , 05:49 PM



Artist, the good little Microsoft drone heard "Andrew Cameron"
<invalid (AT) x01 (DOT) co.uk> say...

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"artist" <mellorya (AT) yahoo (DOT) com> wrote in message
news:Xns945AD50D220A9melloryayahoocom (AT) 24 (DOT) 24.2.166...

Took me what? 5 hours? Brrr, I'm sure there are probably broken links
and mispellings somewhere. I will likely comb for them later.

http://www.practialdesigns.com/

The site looks much better, although there's still something missing
and I can't tell what it is. It looks quite empty.
It's not as busy as the majority of sites for a reason. I'm a rather serene
individual, I dislike business and clutter.

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"Dialog", although a valid way of spelling "dialogue" is very
American. I don't know if you are American, but to the rest of the
English-speaking world, "dialog" looks lazily phonetic. Whatever the
case, it's the wrong word since you can't have one-way dialogue - how
about "one-way channel for communication"?
Actually, dictionary.com says it's misspelt.

one-way channel for communication isn't as dramatic, and it isn't meant to
be precise, it's meant to be ironically accurate. Even though i'm talking
'at you' I chose my words and structure to make it seem like i'm talking
'with you' in an attempt to establish rapport.

Put another way; I realize that we are not talking together face to face,
but I wan't to create that impression to lure people in.



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Default Re: Whew! All of the major stuff is done. :) - 12-25-2003 , 06:27 AM



artist wrote:

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Took me what? 5 hours? Brrr, I'm sure there are probably broken links and
mispellings somewhere. I will likely comb for them later.

http://www.practialdesigns.com/
Looks cool.
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