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Default Re: Two Minor Issues - Fourth Try at Posting (now via Google) - 02-14-2004 , 11:51 AM






In message <71c7825b.0402131820.110c3387 (AT) posting (DOT) google.com>, Bonnie
Granat <bgranat (AT) granatedit (DOT) com> writes
Quote:
Duende <xxxspam (AT) wipkip (DOT) biz> wrote in message
news:<Xns948DE2247459Exxxspamwipkipbiz (AT) 130 (DOT) 133.1.4>...
While sitting in a puddle Bonnie Granat scribbled in the mud:

What say you?

h1 id="constart"><a name="constart" style="text-decoration: none"></a
Technical Writing</h1

Why?

Did you mean it to be
h1 id="constart"><a name="constart" style="text-decoration: none"
Technical Writing</a></h1

I think Jake reviewed it said it was fine, unless I need a &nbsp;
between the A tags. Jake? I think he tested the links already.

Just checked your 'latest' version again -- works fine.

When I go to your Home page (for example) I hear:

(a) H O M E - Granat Technical Editing and Writing
{This comes from your <title></title> entry}

(b)Granat Technical Editing and Writing .
{In a 'LINK' voice -- comes from the 'ALT=' text on your logo}

(c)Skip to main content.
{In a 'LINK' voice -- comes from the 'ALT=' text on your 1-pixel
image}

If, at that point, I hit my 'Return' button any time during 'Skip to
main content', the next thing I hear is:

(d) Granat Technical Editing and Writing provides a wide range of
technical editing and writing services. All services are performed by
Bonnie Granat.

(e)Technical Editing
{In a 'HEADER' voice}

(f) Developmental Editing: Comprehensive analysis of how well your
document fulfills its purpose. Includes recommendations for improvement
of content, organization, and style.

ETC., ETC.

Two things to note on your 'latest' version:

(a) By spelling 'HOME' with intervening spaces, a reader will speak:
AITCH -- OH -- EM -- EE

Could I suggest styling HOME with 'letter-spacing:xxx;' ?

(b) There are two images in your logo. On your Home page one of the
images has alternative text of 'null'. This is fine.

However on some pages both images contain the same entry: alt="Granat
Technical Editing and Writing "

causing the text to be spoken twice.

regards.


--
Jake


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Bonnie Granat
 
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Default Re: Two Minor Issues - Fourth Try at Posting (now via Google) - 02-14-2004 , 02:21 PM






kchayka <usenet (AT) c-net (DOT) us> wrote

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Bonnie Granat wrote:

http://www.granatedit.com

FYI, whatever it was that caused MacIE5 to freeze up seems to have been
corrected.
I am delighted to hear this! ; )

B.


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