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William Tasso
 
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Default seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 10:02 AM






Greetings one and all.

Document: http://seeburg.co.uk

Comments/advice welcome. Thanks.
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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 10:41 AM






On Wed, 7 Apr 2004 15:02:31 +0100, William Tasso <news27 (AT) tbdata (DOT) com> wrote:

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Greetings one and all.

Document: http://seeburg.co.uk

Comments/advice welcome. Thanks.

Overall, excellent.

Meta tags - be aware that keywords are never used for search indexing
anymore, in fact I've heard they can hurt if they aren't actually in the
body as well. Meta http-equiv can be eliminated if you set the server to
handle this - simple if your site is on an Apache server and you can set
an .htaccess file. As the browser checks that anyway, no sense doing it in
the body. Only use the meta method if you are hosted on someone's server
and you don't have permission to set this.

The description meta is used on ocassion, but if it were me I'd not use
any. It's all in the content anyway.


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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 10:49 AM



Quoth the raven named William Tasso:

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Greetings one and all.

Document: http://seeburg.co.uk

Comments/advice welcome. Thanks.
How about adding a couple of <h2>'s to enhance (and break up) the long
area of content?

A couple of the paragraphs are quite long, especially the second from
last. Can you split that/them up a bit more?

Otherwise, ok.

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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 12:00 PM



In article <c511hs$2ndpuk$1 (AT) ID-139074 (DOT) news.uni-berlin.de>, news27
@tbdata.com says...
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Greetings one and all.

Document: http://seeburg.co.uk

Comments/advice welcome. Thanks.
Amazing. Are you really asking for a critique?

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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 03:44 PM



While sitting in a puddle William Tasso scribbled in the mud:

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Greetings one and all.

Document: http://seeburg.co.uk

Comments/advice welcome. Thanks.
Who did it?

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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 04:53 PM



In message <c511hs$2ndpuk$1 (AT) ID-139074 (DOT) news.uni-berlin.de>, William Tasso
<news27 (AT) tbdata (DOT) com> writes
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Greetings one and all.

Document: http://seeburg.co.uk

Comments/advice welcome. Thanks.
(a)
Errors:
2
This page is not Valid HTML 4.01 Strict!

(b) A trip though a grammar/spell checker would be useful
e.g. [It's] --> [Its]

(c) Some way to break up the very large paragraphs would be nice, with
maybe a 'list of contents' at the beginning -- based on some headers.

(d) I'd suggest that the field lengths in the form be increased. As it
stands, I would not be able to see my email address at a glance, but
would have to scroll back-and-forth to check I'd entered it correctly.

regards.

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William Tasso
 
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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 06:47 PM



William Tasso wrote:
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Document: http://seeburg.co.uk
Thank you Gentlemen.

Points arising ...

o I have been led to believe that google will display the meta description
if present and relevant. Other SEs may or may not still give some score
based on the meta keywords.
o Agreed, the text needs work, should be split up and structured better.
o Duende, I fixed it up for a friend based on /index-old.htm at the same
domain.

Once again, thanks.
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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 08:05 PM



While sitting in a puddle William Tasso scribbled in the mud:

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Duende, I fixed it up for a friend based on /index-old.htm at the same
domain.
Ok Sir, whatever you say Sir. )

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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 08:09 PM



Duende wrote:
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While sitting in a puddle William Tasso scribbled in the mud:

Duende, I fixed it up for a friend based on /index-old.htm at the
same domain.

Ok Sir, whatever you say Sir. )
get back in yer box - I'll tell you when ;o)

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Default Re: seeburg.co.uk - 04-07-2004 , 08:09 PM



While sitting in a puddle William Tasso scribbled in the mud:

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Document: http://seeburg.co.uk
You need to preload the two mouseover images otherwise they don't load
until you mouseover. (IE-6 & Firefox)

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