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Default Re: A little bit of Italy - 06-05-2004 , 06:50 PM






I liked your site, but with a few provisos that I'll mention later.

I definitely liked the art, and found the site interesting. It's
wonderful achievement if it's your first site....

BUT:

It's a painfully slow load on dial-up. I know more people are gettin
broadband, but in the meantime, I'd be surprised if anyone else hang
around while it loads. If I hadn't been determined to review you
site, I'd have clicked off.

Why bother with the splash page? They always seem self-indulgent t
me. Get your visitor straight into your site as quickly a
possible...

The name's significance was lost on me. I'd imagined that the sit
would be about someone's hatred of art or of a specific type of art.
The reverse is true, since you're obviously artistically gifted.

The site's interface is confused. Once I'm past the splash page,
can select a 'home page', which is by way of a 'blog' sort of approach
If you intend the site to be commercial, I'd lose all that sort o
thing, too.

And you don't appear to have any keywords, plus there's not much tex
content... How are the search engines to find you? Or do you hav
other ideas for promoting your site?

In brief: visually stunning, but too-slow loading and not terribl
intuitive for the visitor/user.

Great first attempt, though. Congratulations
-
sara
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