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Jim Moe
 
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Default Re: Glutton for punishment, or "please critique this site" - 04-08-2006 , 02:10 AM






JDS wrote:
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http://www.solsuntherapy.com/

You have a CSS validation error. It looks like it is caused by a typo. a
missing "{".
The color scheme does not really work for sun, fun, beach, tanning.
Maybe a "tan" background color would be appropriate?
Yes, a different picture would be good. My first thought was "Man! She
is one skinny woman!" The second was "She needs a tanning salon!"
I did not bother to read the body text: it is too small, it is too late
to squint.
The "Standups" image is a hoot. It looks like the unit is sitting on a
roof at sunset. Where would the "attached dressing room" be?

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