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Default Please critique - 06-25-2009 , 01:54 PM






Please critique this www site: Thank you in advance
www.businessplanscanada.com

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Default Re: Please critique - 06-25-2009 , 03:04 PM






Anonymous kirjoitti seuraavasti:
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Please critique this www site: Thank you in advance
www.businessplanscanada.com

Don't promote "Valid XHTML & CSS" because
a) they're not valid
b) normal people don't care or understand what that means

Don't use XHTML, at least Transitional.

Don't use  s for indenting or centering text.

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Default Re: Please critique - 06-25-2009 , 03:29 PM



Anonymous wrote:

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Please critique this www site: Thank you in advance
www.businessplanscanada.com
I have a few minutes ...

1. I don't care for the yellow background (oh wait, that's my default
color; you've not assigned one)

2. You're writing Transitional; new pages should be Strict - and HTML,
not XHTML

3. Your <blockquotes> don't appear to be quotes of anything, ergo, you
are using the element purely for, probably, indentation (presentation)

4. Learn CSS. This is so 20th Century:
h3>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;Let us help you.</h3>

5. No <h2>; indicates you aren't using them for headings, but again just
for presentation. Learn semantic markup

6. Remove bogus HTML comment markers from the <style> block

7. Says it is "Valid XHTML .." but it isn't
<http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.businessplans canada.com%2F>
Errors found while checking this document as XHTML 1.0 Transitional!
Result: 55 Errors, 3 warning(s)

8. Are you actually http://www.jsbwebdesign.com/ ?
That site exhibits a lot of the same kinds of oversights.

That's all I have time for.

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Default Re: Please critique - 06-25-2009 , 07:51 PM



In article <h20jam$1v4$1 (AT) news (DOT) eternal-september.org>,
"Beauregard T. Shagnasty" <a.nony.mous (AT) example (DOT) invalid> wrote:

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4. Learn CSS. This is so 20th Century:
h3>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;Let us help you.</h3
That is a *slur* on a century that I rather liked!

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