need criticism

http://www.outtobomb.com/

thanks

Otto Bomb wrote:

http://www.outtobomb.com/

It seems to have a lot of Flash or something in it. My browser doesn't
do Flash.

None of the apostrophes in the links belong there. You mean "WALLS" not
"WALL'S" etc.

There are some other misspelled words. "HIM SELF" should be HIMSELF
"OUTTOBOMB.COM TM COPY;WRITEN©1986 FREEWEBS" WRITEN ?

The Guestbook says: "Loading 0%" and nothing else.

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-Warning: I brake for lawn deer

Otto Bomb wrote:

http://www.outtobomb.com/

thanks

Loads pretty fast on cable. Your title (white over yellow) is a bit
hard to read. Not enough contrast. Did you run it through html/css
validators? I did notice you have presentational markup in the html.
You might want to put that into css.

On Mon, 07 Nov 2005 10:42:39 +0200, Otto Bomb <ottobaun (AT) ottobomb (DOT) com>
wrote:

http://www.outtobomb.com/

thanks

Shure - very heeeeeeavy flash.






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