Be gentle - site critique please

Just found this group (ciwah folk, sorry for the multi-post).
Can someone please look at this and make appropriate comments?

http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/

It's only four pages, and it should pretty much work.

If someone can help me out with the 'form' on the contact page (which I
copied) I'd be grateful. PLEASE DON'T USE THE FORM TO SEND ANYTHING TO
ME. At the moment, the addy it points to is disabled!!

Joe wrote:

Just found this group (ciwah folk, sorry for the multi-post).
Can someone please look at this and make appropriate comments?

http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/

It's only four pages, and it should pretty much work.

If someone can help me out with the 'form' on the contact page (which I
copied) I'd be grateful. PLEASE DON'T USE THE FORM TO SEND ANYTHING TO
ME. At the moment, the addy it points to is disabled!!

I like your site Joe.

I think it will look great with some more content.

One thing... perhaps instead of the images all on that one page, maybe you
can create thumbnails, and have links from the thumbnails to the original
image.



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On Thu, 24 Nov 2005 05:03:35 +0200, Joe <joedinmore (AT) yahoo (DOT) com.au> wrote:

Just found this group (ciwah folk, sorry for the multi-post).
Can someone please look at this and make appropriate comments?

http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/

It's only four pages, and it should pretty much work.

The background on homepage repeats the image from left. I'd dremove bg
completely. Try to devide page vertically by too parts 20% x 80%, left one
you can make empty but with solid backgroung - maby grey, or someting like
#CCCC66 - right part you use as main one. Think this will make the pages
to look more filled - they are too empty now, and will make impression of
"tall" pages.
IMHO though



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