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TreatmentPlant
 
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Default Follow on from previous critique request - 03-27-2006 , 07:35 PM






If you'll excuse me the opportunity to start a new thread for a topic
previously raised. The website in question has undergone its first
transformation (more to come) hence the new thread.

I have rebuilt the original (terrible)
http://www.rentals2000.com.au/

and have my first grab posted at
http://members.iinet.net.au/~wabbit/r2/index.html


I still have some way to go, but ask your assistance to resolve some issues:

When viewing in IE 6.0.2900 (XP PRO SP2 etc)
: the address information in the header does not appear until the page
is scrolled. If I change the font-size to x-large it renders
immediately (like its supposed to) but with the normal font-size it does
not?
: the body margin is set at 10px however the divs are not all aligned.
There is misalignment of the header section and the container section
and the footer section?
: the standard/normal/100% font-size is much larger in IE than in FF

When viewing in FF 1.0.7
: the alignment of the smaller divs is not correct. There is supposed to
be a 5px space between each div. The space is there in IE but not FF
: the top of the left and right panels is misaligned from the top of the
main section, despite all of them being lumped in the same container.

Globally
: I am still waiting on some new artwork for the graphic
: I am still waiting for the customer to give me the word-smithed text
and pics
: I have included all the style information on the page (I will strip it
out into the .css file at the end)
: None of the links go anywhere, yet.
: The page is pure html, I will eventually build in PHP
: Page validates as transitional at the moment - but I will aim for
strict validation, later.


If you have any improvements/suggestions please let me know. I am at my
wits end trying to implement the cross-browser functionality.


TIA

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TreatmentPlant
 
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Default Re: Follow on from previous critique request - 03-27-2006 , 07:43 PM






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: Page validates as transitional at the moment - but I will aim for
strict validation, later.
Now strict.


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Beauregard T. Shagnasty
 
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Default Re: Follow on from previous critique request - 03-27-2006 , 09:35 PM



TreatmentPlant wrote:

[Please don't use colons for 'bullets'. Thanks.

Quote:
If you'll excuse me the opportunity to start a new thread for a topic
previously raised. The website in question has undergone its first
transformation (more to come) hence the new thread.

I have rebuilt the original (terrible)
hxxp://www.rentals2000.com.au/

and have my first grab posted at
http://members.iinet.net.au/~wabbit/r2/index.html

I still have some way to go, but ask your assistance to resolve some issues:

When viewing in IE 6.0.2900 (XP PRO SP2 etc)
: the address information in the header does not appear until the page
is scrolled. If I change the font-size to x-large it renders
immediately (like its supposed to) but with the normal font-size it does
not?
Scrap using the size keywords; use percentages instead, as is so oft
pointed out in this group.

body { font-size: 100%; }
h1 { font-size: 150%; }
h2 { font-size: 135%; }
.legalese { font-size: 85%; }

Quote:
: the body margin is set at 10px however the divs are not all aligned.
There is misalignment of the header section and the container section
and the footer section?
: the standard/normal/100% font-size is much larger in IE than in FF
...probably not if you switch to percentages.

<snip rest pending your font-size changes>

Quote:
If you have any improvements/suggestions please let me know. I am at my
wits end trying to implement the cross-browser functionality.
Oh, and stop using pixels for component sizing. Use some number of em.

--
-bts
-Warning: I brake for lawn deer


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Default Re: Follow on from previous critique request - 03-28-2006 , 05:10 AM



Beauregard T. Shagnasty wrote:
Quote:
TreatmentPlant wrote:

[Please don't use colons for 'bullets'. Thanks.


If you'll excuse me the opportunity to start a new thread for a topic
previously raised. The website in question has undergone its first
transformation (more to come) hence the new thread.

I have rebuilt the original (terrible)
hxxp://www.rentals2000.com.au/

and have my first grab posted at
http://members.iinet.net.au/~wabbit/r2/index.html

I still have some way to go, but ask your assistance to resolve some issues:

When viewing in IE 6.0.2900 (XP PRO SP2 etc)
: the address information in the header does not appear until the page
is scrolled. If I change the font-size to x-large it renders
immediately (like its supposed to) but with the normal font-size it does
not?


Scrap using the size keywords; use percentages instead, as is so oft
pointed out in this group.

body { font-size: 100%; }
h1 { font-size: 150%; }
h2 { font-size: 135%; }
.legalese { font-size: 85%; }


: the body margin is set at 10px however the divs are not all aligned.
There is misalignment of the header section and the container section
and the footer section?
: the standard/normal/100% font-size is much larger in IE than in FF


..probably not if you switch to percentages.

snip rest pending your font-size changes

If you have any improvements/suggestions please let me know. I am at my
wits end trying to implement the cross-browser functionality.


Oh, and stop using pixels for component sizing. Use some number of em.

BTS and All

Thanks for the pointers. I have made the changes suggested so far.
Would please be kind enough to continue your evaluation.

http://members.iinet.net.au/~wabbit/r2/index.html


TIA


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Chaddy2222
 
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Default Re: Follow on from previous critique request - 03-28-2006 , 07:02 AM




TreatmentPlant wrote:
Quote:
Beauregard T. Shagnasty wrote:
TreatmentPlant wrote:

[Please don't use colons for 'bullets'. Thanks.


If you'll excuse me the opportunity to start a new thread for a topic
previously raised. The website in question has undergone its first
transformation (more to come) hence the new thread.

I have rebuilt the original (terrible)
hxxp://www.rentals2000.com.au/

and have my first grab posted at
http://members.iinet.net.au/~wabbit/r2/index.html

I still have some way to go, but ask your assistance to resolve some issues:

When viewing in IE 6.0.2900 (XP PRO SP2 etc)
: the address information in the header does not appear until the page
is scrolled. If I change the font-size to x-large it renders
immediately (like its supposed to) but with the normal font-size it does
not?


Scrap using the size keywords; use percentages instead, as is so oft
pointed out in this group.

body { font-size: 100%; }
h1 { font-size: 150%; }
h2 { font-size: 135%; }
.legalese { font-size: 85%; }


: the body margin is set at 10px however the divs are not all aligned.
There is misalignment of the header section and the container section
and the footer section?
: the standard/normal/100% font-size is much larger in IE than in FF


..probably not if you switch to percentages.

snip rest pending your font-size changes

If you have any improvements/suggestions please let me know. I am at my
wits end trying to implement the cross-browser functionality.


Oh, and stop using pixels for component sizing. Use some number of em.

BTS and All

Thanks for the pointers. I have made the changes suggested so far.
Would please be kind enough to continue your evaluation.
I had a look at the site.
It appeared to be ok, but I was thinking that you should maybe make the
background of the menu buttons take up the length of the link text.
It's just a bit harder to read the way it is.....
HTH.
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Beauregard T. Shagnasty
 
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Default Re: Follow on from previous critique request - 03-28-2006 , 08:51 AM



TreatmentPlant wrote:

Quote:
Thanks for the pointers. I have made the changes suggested so far.
Would please be kind enough to continue your evaluation.

http://members.iinet.net.au/~wabbit/r2/index.html
Technically, it is quite good.

You don't have to assign the default styles, such as 'text-align: left'
The 75% for <h4> is a bit small.
I don't care for the white-on-red of "Rentals2000" in the main content;
it looks too much like a button one should try and click on. Try for
something less bold, softer. And there probably should be a space on
either side of the word. Perhaps:

<span class="rentals2000">&nbsp;Rentals2000&nbsp;</span>

Artistically, it is rather plain, but I have no talent in that
department. :-)

--
-bts
-Warning: I brake for lawn deer


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TreatmentPlant
 
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Default Re: Follow on from previous critique request - 03-28-2006 , 05:04 PM



Beauregard T. Shagnasty wrote:
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Artistically, it is rather plain, but I have no talent in that
department. :-)

As you noticed, neither do I!

Artwork is allegedly, forthcoming.

Thanks for the input.


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