//Flaxcreatures

Hi guys,
I'm new here so I'll start with my portfolio:
http://flaxcreatures.acehosts.net

Hope you like it


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"flax" <flax.129ecv (AT) mail (DOT) forum4designers.com> wrote

Hi guys,
I'm new here so I'll start with my portfolio:
http://flaxcreatures.acehosts.net

Hope you like it.

It's bloody awful. A splash page leading to two totally blank blue pages. Oh
hang on, it's flash. Oh well...

You are probably not aware that you are not actually here:

Posted via http://www.forum4designers.com

you are in fact posting to a usenet newsgroup, alt.html.critique. See the
name? html, not flash and critique, not "hey look at my cool stuff". You
post here to ask for a critique, not to just say hello and to advertise your
stuff.

Cheers
Richard.

"flax" <flax.129ecv (AT) mail (DOT) forum4designers.com> wrote

Hi guys,
I'm new here so I'll start with my portfolio:
http://flaxcreatures.acehosts.net

Hope you like it.

splash screens are nothing more than a roadblock to content


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Hi guys,
I'm new here so I'll start with my portfolio:
http://flaxcreatures.acehosts.net

Hope you like it.

splash screens are nothing more than a roadblock to content

True... but some roadblocks look pretty nice, don't they?
<g>

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Hi guys,
I'm new here so I'll start with my portfolio:
http://flaxcreatures.acehosts.net

Hope you like it.

You have posted a Flash website in a html.critique newsgroup.

Nevertheless, here's my opinion:

You give two options on your splashpage for screen size viewing, although
there is only one link - so I can't actually choose between full screen and
normal screen. Therefore it is pointless.

I would change your photo as at the moment, it looks weird with your head
and torso cut out and floating in a burgundy background. How about keeping
the original background of the photo?

Other than that, the Flash is nicely executed and the design works well.

Helen