First Personal Site waiting comments

Hi everyone, finally i found perfect ng for critique.
So, write down a line about this beta5 of my first website....everything u
see, u think about!
^_^
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Nicolò Armato
www.nyoworks.com

On Tue, 02 Mar 2004 00:47:05 GMT, NyoWorks Multimedia Designer
<info(NOSPAM)@nyoworks.com> wrote:

Hi everyone, finally i found perfect ng for critique.
So, write down a line about this beta5 of my first website....everything
u
see, u think about!
^_^

Looks like John Cage's website to me.

Seriously, you ought to give us a hint...

who is :S ??? gimme link please!

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Nicolò Armato
www.nyoworks.com
"Neal" <neal413 (AT) spamrcn (DOT) com> ha scritto nel messaggio
newspr37mjzfudvhyks (AT) news (DOT) rcn.com...

On Tue, 02 Mar 2004 00:47:05 GMT, NyoWorks Multimedia Designer
info(NOSPAM)@nyoworks.com> wrote:

Hi everyone, finally i found perfect ng for critique.
So, write down a line about this beta5 of my first website....everything
u
see, u think about!
^_^


Looks like John Cage's website to me.

Seriously, you ought to give us a hint...

Hi everyone, finally i found perfect ng for critique.
So, write down a line about this beta5 of my first website....everything u
see, u think about!
www.nyoworks.com

1. "everyday, everywhere, a bee design your ideas" does not make sense. It
is BAD English. What are you trying to say?

2. "Please to be patience, Thanks" should read "Please be patient, Thanks"

3. Your navigation images are taking too long to load up on each page, on
DSL.

4. If you have so many sections that are not complete, you should remove
them from your navigation. It's annoying to get there and get a "Section
still in development" message on most of your pages. AND I have to wait for
your long loading navigation buttons to show before choosing another page.

5. There is no purpose to your "splash page" (first page with large graphic)

On Mon, 01 Mar 2004 20:03:25 -0500, Neal <neal413 (AT) spamrcn (DOT) com> declared
in alt.html.critique:

Seriously, you ought to give us a hint...

The one in his/her .sig, perhaps (http://www.nyoworks.com)?

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Mark Parnell
http://www.clarkecomputers.com.au

Quoth the raven named NyoWorks Multimedia Designer:

Hi everyone, finally i found perfect ng for critique.
So, write down a line about this beta5 of my first website....everything u
see, u think about!
^_^

This? www.nyoworks.com It was in your sig, so my reader chopped it off.

This is your first web site? Congratulations. I like it quite a lot.
The only negative comments I could make at this time is

a) lose the W3C widgets on each page. Maybe show them on an about us
page, or a page about the site's technology.

b) it's a fixed width design, but in this case, it is good enough I
won't subtract any points. <g>

maybe c) the logo portion takes up a lot of space in the top half of
the viewport, but since much of the site is about graphic design, I'll
let you get by again.

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thank u very much ^_^ I got it. I'll decide next step with these tips. And
excuse my english something is very poor.
I want to say "Everywhere....everyday (as everymoment) a bee in pic can draw
everything u think"

For DSL I think that it related to my provider.
How many seconds every page need?
in my pc without cache , of course, 4 or less for all elements of a single
page - DSL 256k
too?

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Nicolò Armato
www.nyoworks.com

Of course, www.nyoworks.com !!

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Nicolò Armato
www.nyoworks.com

Thanks for tips, actually it's only about logotypes and photos, but i'll add
new contents, time by time....not only graphics...but audio, songs....and
more, I have to finish my concept epic symphonic album, but actually too
far.

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Nicolò Armato
www.nyoworks.com

On Tue, 2 Mar 2004 12:09:43 +1100, Mark Parnell
<webmaster (AT) clarkecomputers (DOT) com.au> wrote:

On Mon, 01 Mar 2004 20:03:25 -0500, Neal <neal413 (AT) spamrcn (DOT) com> declared
in alt.html.critique:

Seriously, you ought to give us a hint...

The one in his/her .sig, perhaps (http://www.nyoworks.com)?

Yes, I did find it eventually... sigh...