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Go_Busch
 
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Default Critique webpage - 04-07-2005 , 06:23 PM






Not my website, it's a friends but they don't like my opinions. Please take
a look at the page and reply with your pros and cons. Thank you.

http://fattyslims.com/clients/effici...m/index2.shtml
-or-
http://revviety.notlong.com



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Default Re: Critique webpage - 04-07-2005 , 07:05 PM






Go_Busch wrote:
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Not my website, it's a friends but they don't like my opinions.
What were your opinions that they didn't like?

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Please take a look at the page and reply with your pros and cons.
Thank you.

http://fattyslims.com/clients/effici...m/index2.shtml
-or- http://revviety.notlong.com
Is this supposed to be a mockup? Nothing works ...

"This is the best design I have ever done, in my entire life." <lol>

Eclectic mix of CSS and HTML presentation... narrow inflexible
layout... the image of links?...

Bunch of errors:
<http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A//fattyslims.com/clients/efficientelectric.com/index2.shtml>

Did you tell them it sucks? :-)

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Uncle Pirate
 
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Default Re: Critique webpage - 04-07-2005 , 08:06 PM



Beauregard T. Shagnasty wrote:
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Go_Busch wrote:

Not my website, it's a friends but they don't like my opinions.
Great way to distance yourself from harsh comments.

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What were your opinions that they didn't like?

Please take a look at the page and reply with your pros and cons.
Thank you.

http://fattyslims.com/clients/effici...m/index2.shtml -or-
http://revviety.notlong.com


Is this supposed to be a mockup? Nothing works ...

"This is the best design I have ever done, in my entire life." <lol
And I thought I was being harsh when I read this and thought: "then
you'd better find another career." That's a pretty poor "best."

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Eclectic mix of CSS and HTML presentation... narrow inflexible layout...
the image of links?...

Bunch of errors:
http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos...m/index2.shtml


Did you tell them it sucks? :-)

For a one word description, that one works for me. It looked more like
a screen shot to me rather than a "working" page.

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