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Default critique please - 02-27-2005 , 07:00 AM






Please have a look and let me know what you think. The code should
validate, but I am actually more interested in design, copy and content
ideas. Does it make you to make a reservation?

Thanks in advance to all.

http://www.fcccambodia.com/visaya/


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Default Re: critique please - 02-27-2005 , 07:46 AM






On 27 Feb 2005 04:00:53 -0800, cruiserweight <bayon86 (AT) yahoo (DOT) com> wrote:

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Please have a look and let me know what you think. The code should
validate, but I am actually more interested in design, copy and content
ideas. Does it make you to make a reservation?

Thanks in advance to all.

http://www.fcccambodia.com/visaya/
I like the colours - the green and blue give a good first impression. On
my screen the grey on white text is rather faint. I'd be more comfortable
reading it if it was darker. I like how all the pages have exactly the
same design. Maybe make the selected menu item more clearly selected? At
the moment it's in bold and it looks maybe like another menu heading.

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Default Re: critique please - 02-27-2005 , 07:52 AM



cruiserweight wrote:

Menu starts in the vertical middle - weird.
Light grey text on a white background - unreadable.
No clue as to where this place is.
Home link at the _bottom_?!

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Default Re: critique please - 02-28-2005 , 01:11 PM



cruiserweight wrote:

Very nice picture. However, on my small screen, the picture fills the
entire vertical space and I can't see the name unless I scroll. Also
the menu which is vertically aligned, looks strange. Rather align it
to the top, and place at least the "Welcome to Visaya Relax. Renew.
Rejuvenate." bit above the photo.

Voetleuce





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