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John Small
 
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Default Critique on my first real site - 11-30-2003 , 05:30 PM






Need some professional opinions of the following charity site:

www.egprr.org.uk

Thanks,

John.

Throw the lucky 7's if you need to e-mail me.

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Wipkip
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 11-30-2003 , 06:20 PM






John Small wrote:
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Need some professional opinions of the following charity site:

www.egprr.org.uk

A registered Rat Rescue charity. Now why didn't I think of that. I could have been
rich by now.

Site look fine.

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William Tasso
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 11-30-2003 , 06:36 PM



John Small wrote:
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Need some professional opinions of the following charity site:

www.egprr.org.uk

Ask yourself what the table markup brings to your pages.

Check the archive in this group and elsewhere for lengthy discussion on the
subject of access keys.

What necessitates the use of XHTML on these pages?
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Bonnie Granat
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 11-30-2003 , 06:51 PM




"John Small" <john (AT) smallw (DOT) de7m7o7n.co.uk> wrote

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Need some professional opinions of the following charity site:

www.egprr.org.uk

Thanks,

Hi, John. The text is too small -- even for me.



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Nico Schuyt
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 11-30-2003 , 08:00 PM



William Tasso wrote:
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Check the archive in this group and elsewhere for lengthy discussion
on the subject of access keys.
I'm affraid I missed that :-( Can you point me to that specific discussion?
Nico




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Toby A Inkster
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 12-01-2003 , 02:56 AM



John Small wrote:

"I'm ready for my close-up, Lesley!" isn't really a heading is it? So
don't use <h2>...</h2> to mark it up.

Try <p><q>...</q></p> or <blockquote><p>...</p></blockquote> and then
style as desired.

I would recommend moving the registered charity number from the page title
into the footer.

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Contact Me - http://www.goddamn.co.uk/tobyink/?page=132



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jake
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 12-01-2003 , 06:59 AM



In message <pan.2003.11.30.22.30.09.109382 (AT) smallw (DOT) de7m7o7n.co.uk>, John
Small <john (AT) smallw (DOT) de7m7o7n.co.uk> writes
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Need some professional opinions of the following charity site:

www.egprr.org.uk

Thanks,

John.

Throw the lucky 7's if you need to e-mail me.
Nice looking site.

(1)
<div class="hide"><a href="#content" title="Skip navigation."
accesskey="2">Skip navigation.</a></div>

Contrary to popular belief, 'Skip navigation' will be completely hidden
to the majority of screen-readers and voice browsers (rumour has it that
the very latest update will allow JFW to see it, but not older versions,
and no others).
Use a 1-pixel link to achieve the same goal -- or leave it visible.

(From a practical point of view, it's not really necessary to provide a
bypass in this case as there's only 5 items in the menu -- each only 1
or 2 words long).

(2)
Doesn't work in NS4.75 -- consider hiding the CSS:
http://www.gododdin.demon.co.uk/ng/rats.jpg (30k)

(3) spelling:
[temparature] --> [temperature]
[ie] --> [i.e.]

(4)
<acronym>EGPRR</acronym>

might be better as <acronym title="Essex Guinea Pig and Rat Rescue
">EGPRR</acronym>


regards.
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Jake


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William Tasso
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 12-01-2003 , 10:13 AM



Nico Schuyt wrote:
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William Tasso wrote:
Check the archive in this group and elsewhere for lengthy discussion
on the subject of access keys.

I'm affraid I missed that :-( Can you point me to that specific
discussion? Nico
It's tricky because brucie has been posting with 'X-No-Archive: yes' of
late. But this is probably the thread I was thinking of - although I STR it
was longer.

<http://makeashorterlink.com/?Z3CA61EA6>

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Alexander Weber
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 12-01-2003 , 10:30 AM



jake <jake (AT) gododdin (DOT) demon.co.uk> wrote:

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(1)
div class="hide"><a href="#content" title="Skip navigation."
accesskey="2">Skip navigation.</a></div

Contrary to popular belief, 'Skip navigation' will be completely hidden
to the majority of screen-readers and voice browsers (rumour has it that
the very latest update will allow JFW to see it, but not older versions,
and no others).
Even if the class "hide" is only defined in stylesheets with
media="screen, projection"?

I thaught that a voice browser would look after stylesheets with
media="aural". And then "hide" would be not defined and there would be
no reason for omitting the "skip navigation".

Alex.


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Nico Schuyt
 
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Default Re: Critique on my first real site - 12-01-2003 , 11:43 AM



William Tasso wrote:
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Nico Schuyt wrote:
William Tasso wrote:
Check the archive in this group and elsewhere for lengthy discussion
on the subject of access keys.

I'm affraid I missed that :-( Can you point me to that specific
discussion? Nico

It's tricky because brucie has been posting with 'X-No-Archive: yes'
of late. But this is probably the thread I was thinking of -
although I STR it was longer.

http://makeashorterlink.com/?Z3CA61EA6
You're great! Thanks
Nico




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