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asp website critique please
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asp website critique please -
05-08-2004
, 01:10 PM
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hi, just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com |
site itself is hardly exciting, is it. Grey. Hmm.
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Hywel I do not eat quiche
http://kibo.org.uk/
http://kibo.org.uk/mfaq.php
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just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com |
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The fact that it's ASP should be irrelevant - we can't see that. The site itself is hardly exciting, is it. Grey. Hmm. |
"Hywel" <hyweljenkins (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> wrote
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In article <2g4ijnF485v8U1 (AT) uni-berlin (DOT) de>, billy p says... hi, just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com The fact that it's ASP should be irrelevant - we can't see that. The site itself is hardly exciting, is it. Grey. Hmm. -- Hywel I do not eat quiche http://kibo.org.uk/ http://kibo.org.uk/mfaq.php |
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just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com "The page cannot be displayed" ? |
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"Hywel" <hyweljenkins (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> wrote in message news:MPG.1b072adca8ba87f79896c0 (AT) news (DOT) individual.net... In article <2g4ijnF485v8U1 (AT) uni-berlin (DOT) de>, billy p says... hi, just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com The fact that it's ASP should be irrelevant - we can't see that. The site itself is hardly exciting, is it. Grey. Hmm. oh i get it! irony 'cos of the wide variety of colours used on your site. |
Your site is a light gray box on a grey background that uses dark gray
background
oh wait, you changed the colors while I was posting this. Now its blue,
white, and green. And it still abuses tables for layout. But wait, not just
one table, but multiple tables, on something that would take me maybe 4
lines of CSS to replicate.
Since you're posting to alt.html.critique, let's take a look at some source:
1) No DTD
2) <body> contains a "text" color attribute, yet you've also got a CSS file
that you could have declared this on. Same goes for BGCOLOR
3) You've got your outer table aligned to center, yet it is already in a div
aligned to center also. What's wrong? Ya didn't know which one to use?
4) Table "height" is crap HTML and doesn't work. You might think so, but
you're an idiot who didn't declare a DTD.
5) More bogus code bloat by declaring BGCOLOR on the TRs
I could go on and on, but why bother. You're a clueless asshead. You should
be complimenting Hywel's site, but you're too stupid to even know why it is
good.
-Karl
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"craig williams" <cwms (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> wrote in message news:2g9ee0F5333U1 (AT) uni-berlin (DOT) de... "Hywel" <hyweljenkins (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> wrote in message news:MPG.1b072adca8ba87f79896c0 (AT) news (DOT) individual.net... In article <2g4ijnF485v8U1 (AT) uni-berlin (DOT) de>, billy p says... hi, just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com The fact that it's ASP should be irrelevant - we can't see that. The site itself is hardly exciting, is it. Grey. Hmm. oh i get it! irony 'cos of the wide variety of colours used on your site. Dude, you're attempting to comment on Hywel's site? Your site is a light gray box on a grey background that uses dark gray background oh wait, you changed the colors while I was posting this. Now its blue, white, and green. And it still abuses tables for layout. But wait, not just one table, but multiple tables, on something that would take me maybe 4 lines of CSS to replicate. Since you're posting to alt.html.critique, let's take a look at some source: 1) No DTD 2) <body> contains a "text" color attribute, yet you've also got a CSS file that you could have declared this on. Same goes for BGCOLOR 3) You've got your outer table aligned to center, yet it is already in a div aligned to center also. What's wrong? Ya didn't know which one to use? 4) Table "height" is crap HTML and doesn't work. You might think so, but you're an idiot who didn't declare a DTD. 5) More bogus code bloat by declaring BGCOLOR on the TRs I could go on and on, but why bother. You're a clueless asshead. You should be complimenting Hywel's site, but you're too stupid to even know why it is good. -Karl |
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just finished my latest amble into asp. wondered what people thought... www.whatsonthewebcam.com "The page cannot be displayed" ? hmm... not quite sure what happened - might've been updating it. could you try again please. |
couldn't figure out where the navigation was as it looks like the rest of
the text. You need to create some differentiation there, perhaps underline
the links?
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The fact that it's ASP should be irrelevant - we can't see that. The site itself is hardly exciting, is it. Grey. Hmm. oh i get it! irony 'cos of the wide variety of colours used on your site. |
you want colour, click on the photos - most of them have full colour
versions to satiate even the most colour-hungry people.
--
Hywel I do not eat quiche
http://kibo.org.uk/
http://kibo.org.uk/mfaq.php
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